Dec. 25, 2020
A good news
A good news for me. Actually it was not about me. It was about my hometown. I heard this news that a mountain in my hometown was put into the world heritage list several years ago. At that time, this news hit the headlines and became the front-page headline in all the newspapers. I saw it on my phone while I was having dinner. I was so surprised that I jumped up from my table, and everyone in the dining room just looked at me. My hometown, which is a wonderful unspoilt countryside on the edge of a dense forest, is a very small city with breathtaking scenery, but now the natural scenery gives this city a character. I think it will become world-known attractions to attract holidaymakers come here to admire the view. In this case, it will attract more tourists to boom the tourism industry, driving the local economy. On top of that, I am so proud of my hometown, because it has a dramatic setting which contains a fast-flowing river with mountains towering above it.
A gGood news for me.
'News' isn't something countable, so you can't use 'a' before it. Instead, say 'good news' or 'this is good news.'
I heard thise news that a mountain in my hometown was put inton the world heritage list several years ago.
My hometown, which is a wonderfully unspoilted countryside on the edge of a dense forest, is a very small city with breathtaking scenery, but now the natural scenery gives this city a character.
I think it will become a world-known attractions tohat attracts holidaymakers to come here to admire the view.
On top of that, I am so proud of my hometown, because it has a dramatic setting whichthat contains a fast-flowing river with mountains towering above it.
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Besides some small grammar errors, it was really interesting and used a lot of good vocabulary. Nice work!
Dec. 25, 2020
Thank you so much~~~
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A good news |
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A good news for me.
'News' isn't something countable, so you can't use 'a' before it. Instead, say 'good news' or 'this is good news.'
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Actually it was not about me. |
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It was about my hometown. |
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I heard this news that a mountain in my hometown was put into the world heritage list several years ago. I heard th |
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At that time, this news hit the headlines and became the front-page headline in all the newspapers. |
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I saw it on my phone while I was having dinner. |
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I was so surprised that I jumped up from my table, and everyone in the dining room just looked at me. |
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My hometown, which is a wonderful unspoilt countryside on the edge of a dense forest, is a very small city with breathtaking scenery, but now the natural scenery gives this city a character. My hometown, which is a wonderfully unspoil |
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I think it will become world-known attractions to attract holidaymakers come here to admire the view. I think it will become a world-known attraction |
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In this case, it will attract more tourists to boom the tourism industry, driving the local economy. |
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On top of that, I am so proud of my hometown, because it has a dramatic setting which contains a fast-flowing river with mountains towering above it. On top of that, I am so proud of my hometown |
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