Feb. 28, 2022
美術系畢業後有感（二）
我的第二個原因，就是大部分老師很明顯對教書沒興趣，而且根本不清楚該怎樣有效地解釋概念給學生。雖然對他們來說，當老師只是兼職，教書純粹是為了糊口，但我覺得作為老師你是有責任的，不應該那麼隨便地敷衍學生。因為很多老師不知道該怎樣解釋原理，所以他們只會靠佈置作業、給批評等方式來教書。我覺得這樣的教書方法不是很有效率。雖然你確實可以從實踐中學習，但如果你不了解背後的原理，那你從做作業中能夠取得的知識也有限。
美術系畢業後有感（二）
我的第二個原因，就是大部分老師很明顯對教書沒興趣，而且根本不清楚該怎樣有效地向學生解釋概念給學生。
雖然對他們來說，當老師只是兼職，而教書純粹是為了糊口，但我覺得作為老師你是有責任的，不應該那麼隨便地敷衍學生。
因為很多老師不知道該怎樣解釋原理，所以他們只會靠佈置作業、給批評語等方式來教書。
佈置作業 is alright, I heard my Chinese teacher also said so
我覺得這樣的教書方法不是很有效率。
雖然你確實可以從實踐中學習，但如果你不了解背後的原理，那你從做作業中能夠取得的知識也有限。
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yeah it is difficult to explain the concept well and clear
March 1, 2022
Thank you!
美術系畢業後有感（二）
Glad that you took my advice. :)
我的第二個原因，就是第二、大部分老師很明顯對教書沒興趣/沒熱忱，而且根本不清楚該怎樣有效地解釋概念給學生。
In your previous writing, you used "第一", so I made it coherent.
雖然對他們來說，當老師只是兼職，教書純粹是為了糊口，但我覺得作為當老師你是有責任的，不應該那麼隨便地敷衍學生。
In spoken Chinese, what you wrote is fine. I made it more like written Chinese.
因為很多老師不知道該怎樣解釋原理，所以他們只會靠佈置作業、給批評用分派及批改作業等方式來教書。
I assume you meant assign homework so you used 佈置.
佈置一詞, 常用於實體空間, 比如, 佈置會場。
我覺得這樣的教書方法不是很有效率。
雖然你確實可以從實踐作中學習，但如果你不了解背後的原理，那你從做作業中能夠取得的知識也有限。
實作 sounds more natural when you talk about doing homework.
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You made your point clearly. Nice post :)
It is frustrating to take classes where teachers do not know how to teach or they lack passion. I guess you felt that way when you were at college. Am I right?
Those who meet good teachers in their lives are lucky. :)
March 1, 2022
美術系畢業後有感（二）
Glad that you took my advice. :)
Thank you for the corrections! The title you came up with was really concise and to the point.
Yep! During my time there, I only had a couple of teachers that were actually passionate and good at teaching. Most were just phoning it in and it was pretty frustrating to sit through.
March 2, 2022
No problem. I'm happy that it was helpful.
As for those frustrating teachers, I can relate to it, especially when you are eager to learn.
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美術系畢業後有感（二） 美術系畢業後有感（二） Glad that you took my advice. :)
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我的第二個原因，就是大部分老師很明顯對教書沒興趣，而且根本不清楚該怎樣有效地解釋概念給學生。
In your previous writing, you used "第一", so I made it coherent.
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雖然對他們來說，當老師只是兼職，教書純粹是為了糊口，但我覺得作為老師你是有責任的，不應該那麼隨便地敷衍學生。
In spoken Chinese, what you wrote is fine. I made it more like written Chinese.
雖然對他們來說，當老師只是兼職 |
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因為很多老師不知道該怎樣解釋原理，所以他們只會靠佈置作業、給批評等方式來教書。 因為很多老師不知道該怎樣解釋原理，所以他們只會 I assume you meant assign homework so you used 佈置.
佈置一詞, 常用於實體空間, 比如, 佈置會場。 因為很多老師不知道該怎樣解釋原理，所以他們只會靠佈置作業、給 佈置作業 is alright, I heard my Chinese teacher also said so
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我覺得這樣的教書方法不是很有效率。 我覺得這樣的 |
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雖然你確實可以從實踐中學習，但如果你不了解背後的原理，那你從做作業中能夠取得的知識也有限。 雖然你確實可以從實 實作 sounds more natural when you talk about doing homework.
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